Death is my Teddy Bear


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Author: Harold Gross


Genres: Fantasy, Horror

Age Range: General - Teen to Adult

Word Count: 1,680

Draft #2

Unique Downloads: 2

Synopsis:

A young refugee tries to adjust to a new country. His memories and, potentially, his teddy bear make that change a challenge. 


Status: Jumpstart



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Selected Draft Rating
3.00 / Confidence: 10 (Reviews: 1; Review Confidence: 5; Ditto Confidence: 5)

2.55 Heft


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By Bob Kruger on 5/4/2014 — Confidence 5 at review time
3


An interesting story with some great imagery, but it does not seem to fit the theme of the anthology. The flashbacks are too short to give enough context to settle into either level of the story, so the first half is harder to penetrate than it should be. There's a compelling story here, but it needs another draft.


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Total Dittoes: 1
Total Ditto Confidence: 5
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